Wow. I really liked your poem because you used a lot of pictures and I got to listen to your playlist. While I was reading, I felt like I could feel what you were feeling. Good Job.
I really love your poem! I liked how you titled it different from others, put a music playlist of your favorite songs, and put a lot of media to it. In fact, I really like when you wrote, "From sit down already! and Are you done playing?" Overall great job!
I really love how you included so many pictures with your family and about things you love. I especially like how you made of playlist of your songs that you like. I love how at the end you included the concert part!
I liked all the pictures of your family you put in the poem. I like how you titled it the same as one of One Directions songs. You wrote it really good, and I liked how you put in some of your favorite songs.
I liked how creative you were on your title. I not a big fan of the song, but it fits here. I love how you put pictures from all over your childhood. I also liked how you put a playlist in.
HA!!! I see what you did there with the title. I get it... I get it... not that I want to get it. I can just tell since I know that you love one direction so much. You are most definitely from the One Direction concerts.
Citlalli- This is a great poem. I can tell from your poem that you care a lot about your family, friends, and especially music! You added many family photos to show how much you care about them. I really enjoy reading your poem. Lovely job! ps: I really like your playlist! Arctic Monkeys and Panic! at the Disco are pretty rad. ~(◕ ◡ ◕~)
I really like the way you chose to tell your story...The story of your life! (I get it...) The memories and things you mentioned seem very important to you, especially the part about the concert. Nice job with describing and great job with the overall poem!
Wow. I really liked your poem because you used a lot of pictures and I got to listen to your playlist. While I was reading, I felt like I could feel what you were feeling. Good Job.
ReplyDeleteI really love your poem! I liked how you titled it different from others, put a music playlist of your favorite songs, and put a lot of media to it. In fact, I really like when you wrote, "From sit down already! and Are you done playing?" Overall great job!
ReplyDeleteI really liked all the family pictures you have. It reminds me of my family and all the memories i have imprinted in my brain
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ReplyDeleteI really love how you included so many pictures with your family and about things you love. I especially like how you made of playlist of your songs that you like. I love how at the end you included the concert part!
ReplyDeleteI liked all the pictures of your family you put in the poem. I like how you titled it the same as one of One Directions songs. You wrote it really good, and I liked how you put in some of your favorite songs.
ReplyDeleteI liked how creative you were on your title. I not a big fan of the song, but it fits here. I love how you put pictures from all over your childhood. I also liked how you put a playlist in.
ReplyDeleteHA!!! I see what you did there with the title. I get it... I get it... not that I want to get it. I can just tell since I know that you love one direction so much. You are most definitely from the One Direction concerts.
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ReplyDeleteThis is a great poem. I can tell from your poem that you care a lot about your family, friends, and especially music! You added many family photos to show how much you care about them. I really enjoy reading your poem. Lovely job!
ps: I really like your playlist! Arctic Monkeys and Panic! at the Disco are pretty rad. ~(◕ ◡ ◕~)
I really like the way you chose to tell your story...The story of your life! (I get it...) The memories and things you mentioned seem very important to you, especially the part about the concert. Nice job with describing and great job with the overall poem!
ReplyDeleteCitlalli! You did such a great job personalizing your poem. I didn't realize how large your family was until this poem. Thanks for sharing!
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